Lose the ego.
This really isn't that good a track, especially when you compare it to the likes of Armin van Buuren, Above & Beyond, and Tiesto.
First thing, there's nothing wrong with calling a track of yours your best and most complex, but professional, beautifully written, HQ, exclusively for Newgrounds? Do you honestly believe so? I sure don't and any reviewer who's worth their salt wouldn't either. (Quite a few people submit exclusively to Newgrounds, myself included, so that doesn't really make your track any more special either.)
And before I forget - you thank all of these people who made the software you used, but I don't believe you bought all of that. I only know one person, other than myself, who actually bought Nexus. If you'd like to, why don't you prove it to me with a screenshot of the back of your copy of Nexus, or perhaps a photo of the Nexus CD? :)
Anyway, the actual track. Your kick sounds weak to me, it starts out quite plain and then you add a VEC kick on top with no disguise at all. It gradually gets pushed back in the mix as the track goes on, which never really should happen - kicks stay in or very near the front. Your crash is very overpowering, and your clap, as the others seem to have said, is also loud - I don't like the samples you used for either of the two either, they sound like blatant Vengeance to me.
Your hihat line is one of the redeeming qualities of the track, you seem to have put some effort into it - but it feels empty. There's no loop playing in the background to fill it out and give it a richer sound - if there is, it doesn't do enough, or I don't hear it. That and many of your hihat samples sound like they came straight out of VEC, just like many of your other drums...
Your bass synth would actually sound decent, albeit very plain, if you mixed it in better. Your kick takes up all of the bass room, and leaves almost no room for the bass synth - I only hear it in the upper mids, which is hardly enough for a BASS synth. And again, it sounds plain - if you had chosen an original, groundbreaking synth with a fitting rhythm and bassline, and mixed it in well, it would have drastically changed everyone's view of the track.
Your guitar! Of course, a blatant Nexus preset. It adds to the generic feel of the track, and why would I want to listen to your generic track over someone out of the many who do the same generic style, who does it better and faster than you? JohnnyFrizz, you won't get very far outside of Newgrounds unless you find your own style, and using raw Nexus and VEC sounds won't do you any good - you'll always sound like some kid who started making techno music a month ago after finding these cool sounds on the internet. It may sound harsh, but it's very true, and in time if you continue with making Trance you'll realize the same thing yourself.
What's more? The composition isn't actually that good. It lacks direction. It doesn't grab my attention at all, partially because I'm focused on the horrible guitar sound, but partially because the melody isn't at all complex. It's mostly because of the underlying chord progression - a series of major and minor chords. No complex chords at all makes for a boring track - or, to the untrained ear, less an entertaining track than a track employing carried notes, dissonance, and temporary keychanges (not going up a step, but switching into the dominant key, or down a half step to bring things down a bit, for example). Anyone can do what you did melodically, just like anyone can use a raw Nexus preset or VEC sound.
And one more thing, referring to the Author Comments - it's not guitar PLAY, unless somebody is PLAYING it. I'm completely certain you sequenced that, as there are no velocity changes and there's no humanization at all - the rhythms are perfectly played, impossible in reality.
I don't like your other synths very much. I'm finding that either they're boring, like your miniature melody from the intro and ending, or more blatant Nexus sounds, like the tinny sawtooth arp you end with. Not too much to say there.
Continued on my alt...